Comments : I write this as i die

  • 18 years ago

    by Julia

    Omg i like this poem..
    i can relate to it. and its really written well.

    &&thanks for yoor comment!

  • 18 years ago

    by Julia

    Omg i like this poem..
    i can relate to it. and its really written well.

    &&thanks for yoor comment!

  • 18 years ago

    by XxrejectxX

    You.have.so.much.effing.talent.
    love.your.poems.
    i.read.most.of.them. :)

  • 18 years ago

    by MadelineJayde

    Aww that is such a deep and t0uching p0em! its s0 sad but i l0ve it! u hav such a great talent with writing and all 0f ur p0ems are great. thanks f0r the c0mment 0n my p0em, it means al0t
    l0ve maddy x0ox

  • 18 years ago

    by Renee Kotva

    Each poem I read of yours just gets better, this was written very well, I like all the details too. I hope everything is all right just rember to pray!

    very well written def a 5/5

    god bless
    Renee

  • 17 years ago

    by prettytwiggy2

    This peom is really good i think thats it good because i can relate to wut ur saying...thanx for the comment im new to this and i need all the encourage i can get-natalie

  • 17 years ago

    by Koreena

    You are a great writer, thank you for ur comment on mine, u really showed ur emotions, i think all of us can relate to it at one time or another.
    5/5-koreena

  • 17 years ago

    by Lucy Lewin

    5/5
    you're an amazing poet.