Oo love it. i love the style and some lines were just so perfect:
You are the ghost,
That in my dreams, will always creep.

awesome

Cool

Great peice, the repitition works very well in this peice.

5/5

Oo! i lik that one! it's kinda like you hate it and then at the end itz lik he kinda watches out for you :) hehe.. 5/5
jessy

Spooky....I liked the use of repetition in this. I dont know if "dual" and "soul" worked so well in the rhyme but very good.

[lost_laureate]

This was a cool poem. Good job on this one :)