Comments : Go away

  • 18 years ago

    by Rob

    Love it!
    tis gr8

  • 18 years ago

    by vamp

    Awesome work =)

  • 18 years ago

    by Banana

    Bravo... But who holds your heart and who holds your mind? And which one matters the most?

    ....Anonymous....

  • 17 years ago

    by master of shadow

    Good peice, very clearly written

  • 17 years ago

    by Ellie

    The rhyming is forced on the bottom two lines of the second stanza, unless that was done purposefully.