Wow...... thats a lot of feelings mixed in there. Its really good though. I can tell you that I have a pain too. If you need someone who will listen to you I will be there.
I hope that your pain does end soon.
God bless you
lots of love
Renee

Very good ... i there could be more tho

Tis a fairly decent poem, maybe you could check some spelling and sort some kind of paragraphing, but overall it was good. w.done.
Becca x