Nice job. Is this for someone special? lol j/k well it was pretty good.
4/5
Vino

Great poem! i love how u kept using "we share the same dream" over and over. I think u can improve it by keepin close to the same amount of syllabals in each line caz it makes the poem flow better

Loved it!! keep it up :)

I know the poem is supposed to be about some kind of dream but you really don't need to repeat it in every line or every other line. It kind of takes the impact away. You should try seperating or rarely using the important sentences that you feel really do make or symbolize a point. 4/5

Niiiiiiice! good job on this one!

Dont listen to MY1&only becasu eit was amzing i love it WHAT AM I SAYING I LOVE YOUR POEMS (all of them) there so good you have a wonderfull talent hunnie!! xoxroxyxox