An0ther great p0em!! that is a very interesting p0em and i l0ve it! 5/5.. keep up the great writing and i h0pe 2 see m0re p0ems 0f urs
l0ve maddy x0ox

Suprise. Another great write =) I love reading your poems. They have something I cant quite point out like no ohter. Like they stand out? I like it how you end the same quote on every verse.

5/5

Another good poem, I like it. Keep up the good work

Great poem
aagain i like the repetition at the end of each stanza
the emptiness is very well portrayed in this poem, i have no criticism for this poem(sorry to let you down)
~HazE

Nice style, great use of words.
You may want to check
-I'm living,
But all my I'm living is a lie,

Your life isn't meaningless - you write amazing poems that make a big difference to other's lives.

"all my actions are mundane replicas of the past"

i understand that completely.

amazing.