Exellent! very well done, how every second stanza was about strange and dark aspects, and the otehres were about the fairer aspects. the overall effect was exellent. it was hard to tell if you were speaking of the actual devil or simply a twisted human.

Ruby

Very clever poem
Me likes it
Me also runs out of compliments . . . -_-

Very good peice, well written and progresses wrll thoughout.

5/5

The contrasts are good and i like how they continue throughout the poem, it emphasises the bad...if that makes sense! xx

I like the rhyming structure of this poem
5/5
Excellent work

I love the way you wrote this, having it contrast...what a good idea. I loved it. keep up the great work.

~Joe~

You kinda scared me with this one..lol...but other than that great poem!!!

It was good and was very scary and frightening, but it was still good.
xxxxx

Good job Sole. It is a very powerful piece. Kind of EvIl..Hahaz..Good piece though. I def. give you a 5/5..