I really like it good job

That was amazing and tho im christian i kno wut u mean...u hav a grrt ploit to all of ur poems and the emotion is soo intense...i lovved it! keep writing...thx for the comment
sore

If there isn't a heaven please tell me why christ died on the cross for ALL of our sins so that oe day we will have a better place to be.

If there isn't a heaven please tell me why when jesus was hanging on the cross he said to the man on his right "you shall join me in paradise"

If there isn't a heaven there where is god at? Have you ever watched after rain when the sun is out and seen beams of light. Thats god renewing his water

I absolutely loved this.

i am religious but in no way am i gonna preach to u. i think this is very justified and true in many ways. i love the way u questioned everything anyone said in it.

and i kno i already commented on this, but i hadnt realized it until i finished and read my comment from awhile ago.but its very good. be very proud of it.

love ya lots,
~sore

This one is alot better that some people let on but you might want to add punctation (sp) to guide you readers.