Hey thanks this is a good poem. Keep writing.~red

Wow excellent!
Great job...I can relaly relate to it...Keep it up!
-xxxx-

Awesome Poem. I loved it. Keep up the amazing work.

~Joe~

Awww, This is sad! Cheer up =]

luv natalie x-x

I love the meaning of this poem.. it's true and greatly written.

If you could see my heart
it would be made of steel
because it would not
be breakable or be
able to feel any pain.

I love that part. You kinda sound like me(sorry if you take that bad) But you close your self up so know one knows how you feel. My friends dont even know what is going on with me..

Rach ♥

Hey i really slike this poem1
~!ugly & unloved!~

Hey returning the favour!. I like this poem, but you shuld learn to space out the words into fragments so its easier to read. i almost didnt read it becuz it was all in one clump. but im sure glad i did. love leah xox

Hey great poem so i am taking it that your one of those people who can feel peoples pain but only see their happiness and wish you had it as well your not alone
againg great poem
carly

Great, great poem. I hope you know how truly talented you are, this poem literally put me on the verge of tears because reading your words is like seeing some of my thoughts on the computer screen. I am majorly impressed. 5/5

This is a really good poem!

Amazing! 5/5

I love it.

Great poem. 5/5.

keep it up.

much love,
mac.<3
[.just.another.silly.teenage.girl.]

Thanks for the comment i really liked this one it was great=) keep it upp and write some more soon i cant wait to read more love linda

This poem is so deep. but 1 question....y do u feel lke its all ull ever feel?

I felt your emotion, yet you still kept your anonimity present. It was very well written, and the style was... ew to me, but I ejoied it. Well done. 5/5

-Liz-