You use words very well in this poem, making easily understood images. I enjoyed this a lot.

I love the last stanza.

Great poem! Short but sweet =p
The language you used is great, I don't know what half the words mean lol but it is very effective. Take care,
- Polly

I love the last stanza... And the whole poem was really great. I love the wording especially. Very professional, David. hehe. Loved it anyways. It was very good

Love Always
~Casey J