Nicely done.. this expresses a lot of feelings and emotions.. I liked it.. good work! 5/5

Wow, I loved your poem. It felt to close to home. My bf is in the Congo, and Im waiting for him. your every word describes my every feeling.

Awww thats a cute poem, keep up the good work

NOW THAT'S WHAT I'M TALKING ABOUT! Say your mind in rhyme. Great poem and I see you're doing better. Nice job 5/5
-Vino

That was truley great... and post wut u write...ive posted some stuff that i never thought i would tell anyone...but ur among frends, no one will judge u...nice flow and i loved the first and last line repetition...
love ya lots,
sore

Well done good flow. Painful message. Great emotion and imagery. Keep writing

Thats Awesome, Stefhy its Amie i havent spoken to you in ages!!! what have you been doin? i hope you remember me!

Absolutely wonderful!
I'll have to check more of yours out.
Take care

Great flow; the pain is evident in every line. passionately penned piece.

good luck and peace
shobhana

I loved it, i sooo know how you feel ... you showed soooo much emotion you truely did a wonderful job 5/5

~!*FallenTears~!*
~!*Meaghen~!*

Wow... yeah that was a great poem.... i love that poem because it's exactally how i feel and i can see it in my head. you are a talented writer and i hope to hear more of you writeing.
~Chrisitna~

This poem is great. I love the rhymeing pattern, and everything flows very well. The content of the poem is extremely awesome, and shows much emotion, definetly an awesome poem!

This poem is great. I love the rhymeing pattern, and everything flows very well. The content of the poem is extremely awesome, and shows much emotion, definetly an awesome poem!

I feel speechless. I don't know what to comment on. It's another beautiful poem. All your love poems are amazing. I like how you used the questions more than once. Good job!
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Charisma*

I liked how at the end you pulled back questions you asked at the beginning, questions, i think, that nobody has left unasked, and everyone left unanswered.