Gloria, bless your heart...i lost my words how you've done this beautiful sad penned yet great message, it's touched myheart. hugs. take care.

bert.

Wow, I am at a loss for words....
Each scenario displayed by your flawless words brought tears to my eyes. Such raw truth...
The message within this is a powerful one. It's something that we should never forget, children are precious.
The way you ended this piece is breathtaking. It really drives the entire message home.
Take care and keep it up~Holly

Ghandhi said:
"Be the change you wish to see in the world.."

Goodness is here, in this world, if We are not
empty-hearted.

Your poem is very touching and very moving, and, it is both an effort and a prayer...The Seeker proves,, by definition, that this world, itself, is not evil, rather, that some of it's inhabitants are...So, we Seek to be the change we wish to see in this world, and we do, indeed, thereby, change it.

Peace and Good Will toward your efforts, and thank you for them.

Wow, Awesome poem. Has so much emotion within. The Flow and Rythme is great.

~Joe~