Comments : Poetry (Senryu)

  • 18 years ago

    by Melissa

    Just beautiful and perfectly said! You write these haiku's so well, great job!

  • 18 years ago

    by Simon Hayes

    ^^ That says it all. Your Haiku's are very good. Materfully done :)

  • 18 years ago

    by Steven Beesley

    Nice, but a Haiku is about nature only, this is a Senryu. Still a nicely written piece.

    Best regards,

    Steve