OMG! THAT IS SO SAD! WAAAA!

I think this poem is beautiful. Very sad though. :( I'm sorry about the horse.
I wrote a poem about a horse, called 'precious horse' it's no where near as good as yours is. i love the way you write, it seems to flow really well with me. Keep it up,
xxx

Wow .
great work!
keep it up
-Lisa