Wow i cant believe of what i just read, this is a materpiece of art! i loved it. Ill be waiting for more poems
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Whoa.. this poem is amazing. I've certainly felt like this before but did not know how to put it into words. You explain it so perfectly and so relevant. Great job =)

Wow! this poem is so true! adults are sometimes so engulfed with there rules, and ''maturity'' that they forget how to have fun!!

This was a superb job! i think it has truth, especially how u were saying that adults forget having fun! 5 from 5