Again, somebody here can write and keep writing. I read that you combine styles, right, well it certainly is different that the usual tell it straight to you style. I'm amazed.

This peice is full of ideas and descriptions making it a very livly and well composed peice of writting. your word choice is perfect thoughout creating a wonderfully mastered peice of poetry.

What once was home is now a briny hell.

That was my favorite line in the poem! Your poems have a aspect changing meaning in them, and I found them a complete joy to read. 5/5