Another great piece of work. its nice to escape into ur own little world, when things around get tough. really well written 5/5 xx

I think I'm putting you under my favorites... I proably relate to this the most. I feel my world is already split into three of four. Three I have to expirance, one I made for myself, I'm constently pulled from that one. Anyway, back to your poem, no more about me. This poem is very nicely written, neat, defined, dreamy. Captchers the readers imaginatoin.

Great poem! I can definitely relate to it. The flow was really good, & everything else. Great job! 5/5**

Really surreal, like a dream, great quality for a poem. Really nicley done. btw thanks for the comments.