I thank all who write comments! thank you ever so much!

I think u have excellent technique keep writing =) and ty for the comment as well

Very Good keep it up! 5/5

Thats great, it really brings me in, now im curious as to wat the *thing* is but its all in the mystery. i love it 5/5. keep it up! and u comment on one of my first poems jus wanted to sa ythanx, first comment, meant a lot.

keep writin, ill keep readin