Awesome Job. I loved this poem. you have a nice way to Flow the wording. Keep up the good work.

~Joe~

This one was really refreshing, very unique vision of writing, really liked the idea and the whole concept.

all the best and take care
5/5

I love this poem. Very awesome!!

I like the way youve brokenn the sentences up onto different lines, this is very effective in poetry that doesnt rhyme xx

I like the way youve set out ur p0em. very well written. thank u f0r ur c0mment 0n my p0em. meant al0t t0 me!

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Dora

Wow amazing and wonderful greatly written very well worded and just a splendid job at expressing thee emotions,,,I loved it and a very delightful read and I can relate a lil 5/5