That was good..Some parts sound just a little choppy but other than that it's good!!! Keep it up TMOMH!!

~Always4You~

I love this 4 stanza thingy I wil def try it out..keep it up GREAT poem. Vrry beautifully written.

Lissa

Aww this so beautiful wow, i have no idea what else to say.. can a poem this amazing really be complimented or critisized in words? i dont think so.. this is just.. speechless..

My love was forever and ever
While mine grew pale the next day
huh? nbut i love the poem and i still think that u two should be together.

O0o another good one....yeah, i deffinatly know that feeling...
with luv *(b)*