This is pretty good. it was like you were confiding your feelings to someone, like a good friend or something.

This is very good, very clearly written and effectivly portrayed. it holds the readers interest wel and the flow is very smooth.

5/5

Wow you just stole my idea lol i feel like this too, well felt . a while ago the same thing happend to me, but me and that girl are best friends now so i'm happy with it, and we both moved on =) so just open your eyes and look for another guy lol
anyways 5/5

~StefQ

I loved this poem. I can relate and it was just very good. Keep writting. 5/5
~Sandra

Very good poem. Keep up the good work. The only problem I had was that it was a little long.5/5