Wow. this is amazing. i could only dream as writing as good as you.
and thanks so much for the comment =)
5/5
lauren

Wow.... i can onli dream to write like that! i loved it! this poem is awesome.. keep it up 5/5
Jess

Good poem, very heartfelt, keep writing. Thanks for your comment.

Excellence!! tis fantastic!! hunni!! very you know close to reality... why cnt i write like gd ppl like u lot
lub lil xxxxx

Wow i didnt kno i've commented on this poem... anyways... lol
i will say this again.!
awesome... loved it!!!! 5/5 no doubt
and thank you for commenting on my poem there will be another one coming soon this next one is about a 12 yr old girl named susie. shes abused.

i will have it done probably by tomorrow sunday may 21
anyways i love you work! its great keep it up!!1
love always
JeSS