"The taste of sweetened
death, gone from my
lipe, and movement
gone from my hips."

favorite lines haha. your rhythm faltered slightly at times, but this is still a great poem nonetheless. i have a new poem, so if you wanna read it, its there...but yes, keep up the great work

This was very interesting... i loved it, its different especially because you make death sound so good and so embracing :) keep up the good work

Good jod i reall ylove this one

Rly good poem!!! I loved it alot. keep them coming out this way( same style and just as good) !!!

Once again another amazing poem by an amazing poet!!!

Wow i loved it hun it was so good
love ya
jessi