Hey great poem! :D I loved how you formatted it differently! keep it up. btw thanx 4 the comment on my poem *grins* meant a lot!! *hugs* ruthie xoxo

Heyyyy, i liked this poem it was it good it worked well together and the words flowed all the way through.

Thanks for ur comment, i really appreciate it.

xxx cici xxx

Good flow in this peice and a almost unique way of presenting it.

Wow, excellent poem. It is so powerful, the way it's set out, it builds up with quite a strong, positive tone but it then comes crashing down- very sad. Nice poem once again, a great read.

Interesting topic, something that happens all the time in our lives

Wow this is so me. i love the repetition and the three 'un's. the organization is great too. its short but it has such a strong effect. nice job!