This poem is such a reflection of how i feel, and what has happened to me!!!

Hi Josh

This is exactly how im feeling now, and im glad to know im not the only one feeling this...it hurts and its confusing

This was very good Anita. Another great, wonderful piece of work. Just don't keep this poem in two seperate catagories like it is right now. It belongs in only one of them. Good job though!

-Artimis-

A)Title. dosn't really stand out but ties in well.
b)Concept. Pretty good. Maybe more of a love poem section under lost love than this one.
c)Emotional element: Confusion:
It hurts me to think that what we have is now gone, and I'm searching my heart for where our love went wrong.
D)Over all. I'd uppercase those i's and maybe break up the lines. Maybe one exclaimation point so it dosn't feel like a scream. 4.6-4.7/5

I really like how you flow your poems. how you constuct them. it was really good.

Kat

Wow .. I love this one.. i think its my favorite of yours so far.. your such a amazing poet.. im definitly adding you to my favorites.. your amazing.. i especially like this line

It hurts me to think that what we have is now gone, and I'm searching my heart for where our love went wrong

Great write 5/5

~!*FallenTears~!*
~!*Meaghen~!*

This is very well written and constructed. it shows how you're feeling very clearly and holds the readers interewst thoughout

This is very well written and constructed. it shows how you're feeling very clearly and holds the readers interewst thoughout

This is truly heartfelt. i cant feel the emotions. nice job!

This was really good. I hope things are okay, You said in the post your poems are your inner feelings. Im sorry for the pain you are expreriencing, But great poem! 5/5

luv natalie x-x