That was great, i lied it alot
keep it up
love Tara-Kay

This poem, creates a bit of a paradox. . .

What i liek about all you writes is your style. you can write so many different pieces but eyt they are all just purely breathtaking! you have some true talent, loving all that you write.

Kat

I loved this very humble and sweet.
short but great welld done xxALLYxx

This is a really good poem. My favorite stanza was:

I was wrong to make you wake
From your everlasting dream
But your careless dream was fake
At least, that's what it seemed

I loved it! 5/5*

Great job!! I loved the 2nd stanza!! Keep up the good work!!