Aww, i wish we could all be in love, be happy, and smile, but we cant can we?
This poem is awesome, its really well written and i loved it, not because it was sad, but because it was good.
love Tara-Kay
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Wow this is so sad =*(

I love how you describe this breath moment so detailed. It's absolutely fantastic. I could see it all happen right in front of me, like a very dramatic movie.

Beautifully written! Great use of words, and a fantastic flow..

Excellent! Took my breath away, and made my eyes teary

Lotsaaaaa love
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This is so beautiful and i sincerely mean that i rarely comment poems but this really deserves it .......

I love your poem it sooooooo beautiful it really made me think you have a wonderfull gift

Omg i really like ur poem i feel for ya trust me i def kno how it feels