Comments : The Beast

  • 18 years ago

    by Lost Soul 691

    You've captured the "freedom of the ride" beautifully. Nice write.

  • 18 years ago

    by Melissa

    This is awesome, Bill! Glad you got your bike, sounds like your having a blast.. Love the second stanza and what a perfect ending! Good to see your writing again. ;o)

  • 18 years ago

    by Simon Hayes

    Superb! My friend, you've conveyed your wild times incredibly well. I enjoyed the read. Kinda made me want to be there :)

  • 18 years ago

    by PS

    Amazing. fills me with childhood memories cuz i dont ride a bike too often. amazing. i love the dragon imagery. nice job!

  • 18 years ago

    by eric

    Hahaha thats awsome 5/5 :D good job love the second stanza

  • 18 years ago

    by Natalie84

    OK don't ask me why but this reminded me of Shrek...LMAO I DID watch it last night so maybe that's why.

    I LOVE IT!!!!!!! Seeing men riding their bikes in the streets looking like they are carefree from the "real world" is one of the sexiest things to me...wind blowing in their hair...completely relaxed...wanna ride past my house some time?....LMAO

    I just frigin love it...AWESOME POEM!!!

  • 18 years ago

    by Natalie84

    Oh and YES....I LOVE the title!!!!!!!! Excellent choice!!!!!