That was a sad poem it made me feel sad but it was a good one tho! great work keep it up!

Awesome!! not the pain part, but getting the feelings out and knowing that its time to move on... you go girl!! Loved it!!

God bless

Sammib

This should go under the sad category because it was so full of emotion and sorrow felt the most prominent in this. What you have is good but with more attention to detail, digging a little deeper even it could be better...

Still nice stuff...

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