That was an excellent poem Shane. Great use of atmospheric terms, well done =)

Much love and God bless,
Fallen*-

P.S: I'd appreciate it if you could please check out one of my poems- I think my poem 'A Descendent' would fit your taste perfectly- but thats your decision! Bye for now -x-

I really like it.

I LIKE THE POEM KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK

Very nice poem!!! deep
good luck

Verry strong....very refreshing piece..keep it up bud.

Lissa