Wow this poem is amazing...!

Really good. powerfull and clearly written thoughout with a good flow and strong rhthum

5/5

Wow! stunning poem, very dramatic and also sadly very true for some people. Keep up the good work 5/5

I really loved this poem so touching

This is a very good poem! It has strong feeling to it, alot. Aw..that's so sad=( Did that actually happen about your parents fighting a stuff=(? You can talk to me anytime you want! BTW thank you for the advice I will try that. And Keep up the good work! I'm looking forward to reading more of your poems! Cya
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*van.e.ssa*
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Hi Ya,

So although this is sad its has some beauty to it. Nice to know that we arent going to live forever - forever begins when we die. Really like what you have written here.

Godbless,
Sammib