We're all just spiralling, conspiring against death

That line is soo b-e-a-utiful
reading just that line makes me want to twirl my head in a circle( thats a good thing)

still don't know where I'm supposed
to go to waste my hours for dollars that won't amount to much

I love this line because i can relate sooo much. slaving away at doing something and then the reward is never payed. this could be for a job or something more then that.

I drew
a picture of real life and shattered someones glass-eye
because they were afraid to feel-

This confuses me some... i don't know what your trying to say even though i love the way this sounds.

the wall's only job is to stand up, so I don't have to
put any effort in, without reward or even bait -

Lifes not fair sometimes. The wall has it easy. It was born to do something simple. and we are born to do something so ... complex.

i can't really think of anything you need to change. It's solid all around there is just that one line that i was confused about . but that is just me. :)