Wow! Impressive poetry - The funny characters in the last line need sorting out - but the rhyming was good most of the way through, the flow was great. Great poetry.

Peace. [Sole]

You are far from me
Gone is our love which was true
I miss your soft touch
I miss my world which is you

The fact that you used which two times in taht stanza kind of throws it off. For me it's a pause as I read that word.

Other than that I did enjoy the poem. I think my favorite part was this line:
But the mirror reveals only me

The title was decent. Attention getting for sure. I just think you might want to reread that one stanza :)

Aw! this sounds like it'd come out of my mouth about my ex... this is exactly how i feel about him, but i made a mistake and it's never gonna happen again... great job. 5/5

Aww.. very good, very sweet, and very cute! i loved it! keep up the good work!
jessy

Very nice one...very touching..loved it...lots of meaning!...
~*Linz*~

Wow...this was a really great poem....the emotions the flow...the word choice...great job...
Emma 5/5

Wow this is so sad. I like the use of the powerful verbs they added life to the poem...Very romantic.

[lost_laureate - come find me]

Wow!!! This was so romanti like lost laureate said before!! 5/5!!! So sad!!

Aww hun. I'm sorry. Heartbreak is the worst pain. I hope you feel better.

I hope to find you now
Before your goodbye sings
I realize now I need you
Without you, Im nothing

Great ending...really great!!

Short and to the point. Just how I like it. Really good poem. Even though it was short, You got your message across very clearly. And I really liked this one. Speshly the last stanza. It really brought it all together. Keep it up! 5/5

`taleeee xx

Awww.. that was adorable! what a wonderful poem! it flowed well and the emotion was all there..nice job!

Awh, that one brought tears to my eyes aswell. I can actually relate in away, and I really loved this poem. The flow was great aswell.

Part of me died
My heart stopped beating
Thoughts quit racing
Life lost its meaning
((I really liked this line))
hope to find you now
Before your goodbye sings
I realize now I need you
Without you, Im nothing
((You broke rhyme here, Bad!))

Besides the broken rhyming scheme, this poem wasn't too bad.. But it was very cliche.

xDarkSuicidex 5.5

Omg!!!! i love it!!!! keep it up!

Aww.. this is just too sad.. and soo cute though.. very simple words but still the emotion and the words are strong.. something about you waking up and seeing only yourself was a really great stanza.. idk why lol.. anyways.. truely amazing job!