This is pretty much how my relationship went.....i hate to think that we arent gonna be, but it is our destiny to be apart.......
much love,
sore

Good, poem ..nice flow.. and I like how u ended it.. gave it a 5.. take Care Sara

I liked the poem from the title..and when i read it..i liked it more..keep shinin..

Im sorry to hear that this is how your relationship ended. i know what you are going through, because recently i went through the same thing.that is a great poem. i like how you are perfect together, yet perfect apart. great way to describe some friendships and relationships.mine was just the same. thanks for your comment. il keep the comments coming on yours :)
love ya lots,
tammie

Ugh, im assuming that something happened with you two...that REALLYYYY sucksssss. just try to hold it together. if this love wasnt true, then its gonna fall apart. just remember the good times. great poem nonetheless