Aww this is sad. i esp like these lines:
But i forgot that i loved a heartless stone,
who scattered me, my heart, even my bones

I stood so stunned looking at you,
wondering that how did you say so.
Before my silent tears could say something too,
you asked me to leave, you told me to go.

You broke my heart into two,
i always expected this from you.
But i made my mind that as i love you,
one day you will love me too the way i do.

My confidence on my love was stronger than hill,
i believed that you will also love me by your own will.
But i forgot that i loved a heartless stone,
who scattered me, my heart, even my bones.

i love thesse lines.they are perfect for a poem like urs. huni dont give up coz theres always hope.......but in a way u shud give up on the idiot who broke ur heart into two coz he does not deserve ur pure hearts love. theres a quote "its beta to lose a lover than to love a loser" always rememba that. ur a talented poet with lots to lookforward to in life so be happy huni :)

this poem was beautiful jus like you 5/5

sonam

Very heartfelf poem Bharti, great job!

Hey thats a very sad one but beautifully expressed and some great examples quoted.

hope u r feeling fine

all the best and take care

Broken Love. I am trying to write a poem about it now and yours kicked mine right of the water. Incredible and trutfully written.

Some nice lines in here, but the mixing up of the rhyme sceme really makes it hard to read and other things as well that just distrupt the flow