Comments : Another Way To Survive

  • 18 years ago

    by Fallen~Tears

    This is suck a good poem.. I love it it has so much emotion in it.. I thought it was absolutely amazing! Great write my favorite lines are..

    momma always told her to keep it in her hand
    daddy never listened cause he was the man

    a little trick she was stealing your heart
    small waves of sweetness straight from the start

    ~!*FallenTears~!*
    ~!*Meaghen~!*

  • 18 years ago

    by shannon

    A really nice poem 5/5 keep it up

    thanks for sharing
    take care
    shannon