Very well weritten clear peice. good content and very xmooth flow

5/5

Good flow and a weird thing yet cool anyway.

"Wishful magic trilogy,
Stricken to be blind,
Frozen in the icy night,
Forever not to find,"

Loved those lines though I'm not sure why. Word choice was strong.
~S3I -Faith

As usual i love it. your poetry is slowly evolving into something wonderful. you have an exellent way with words!
well done on anouther exellent poem!

Ruby

p.s. thanks emma, and i know i can talk to you

Hey emma. me again. This was unexplainably ur best. i do't know why or how, but it hit me. i'll cya tomorrow and keep smiling!
-Suzie
xox

Beautiful...

I love the way that you can string things together, and make them work...

Loved it...

Excellent again, i love the flo of this poem, very gr8. u make things work well together 5/5

Very powerful. However, Dispare = Dispair. Overall, a very wonderful poem. 5/5 =]

-Jenna.