Comments : Love like this

  • 18 years ago

    by Fallen~Tears

    I thought it was really good not my favorite of yours the first stanza is my fav.. keep it up 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Simon Hayes

    This is a wonderful poem!! Don't even sweat the votes. People gutless to vote and not comment aren't worth even acknowledging. You've written a loving piece, written from the heart. An enjojyable read.

  • 18 years ago

    by Carmen

    Utterly amazing... how could this only have a 4? that bull****. anyways, this poem is amazing and wonderful

  • 18 years ago

    by Kaylee

    I'd suggest capitalizing the i's but other than that forget the votes. I'll vote anyway. I liked the title but it didn't seem strong enough for the poem. The poem was beautiful and slightly powerful. Definately emoional that the title just seems dulled down.

  • 18 years ago

    by Bridgette

    Aw that is such a beautiful poem! it really expresses your thoughts & feelings well. great job!

  • 18 years ago

    by Truly in Love

    I loved the true essence of love that this poem holds... very well written.. it makes the readers fall in love one more time...
    Keep writing..
    5/5

    Much Love,
    Ipsita

  • 18 years ago

    by Tripp

    When we hold each other i hear the bells ring
    and on the boughs of our love the fairies swing

    love those lines....and i can identify with this entire poem. love is really a magical thing.

  • 18 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    When i read this poem, i loved it, it made so much sense and is well written.
    You came 3rd in the contest you wrote it for, well done
    Tara-Kay