Comments : Loss

  • 17 years ago

    by PS

    Oh that so good. my favorite line is the one with the mole. it is an deep sad poem. nice job

  • 17 years ago

    by Kaylee

    It seemed deep and more detailed. I didn't care much for that sentence with the exclaimation point as it seemed to accuse and shout. But other than that it was a lot better than your other one. 5/5