I love ALL your stuff, and though this seems to have symbolism that I don't understand, I really love it. 5/5 as always! DON'T DISAPPOINT (What am I sayin'? You NEVER do!)!!

Heyya,
This was really good..My favourite part had to be "I guess that no one truly cared That what I'm finally shown
but ill take this life of death rather than that throne
It's funny how the years have past and no one still has shown
But alas it's over now and i finally have a good home"

I actually read it over and over..It was a great sad ending!!
I loved your words you used really made the poem powerful!! Great work, I really enjoyed it x

Very well written greatt use of vocab and expression thoughout

5/5

Omg this was such a good poem. Its very deep & emotional. great job!! 5/5*

Yeah, deep, emotional, powerful, very well written and flows well. keep it up
xxxx

Awesome poem, from beginning to end. Brilliant start. Nice rhymes as well. Keep it up.