This was good. It was nice and simple. There was some errors in it, But I think there just site errors. Keep up the great work 5/5

luv natalie x-x

I didn't really understand what the poem was about. it was kindof confusing some of the times but it was a good poem all the same. keep it up

pip xxx

Good peice, simple and clearly written.

Nice..good flow. 5/5

Neat poem, I think you mean acknowledge at the end but other then that good work :) 5/5