Heya, firstly thankyou soooo much for the comments on my poems that is really kind of you and i really appreciate it! And of course if you want to use a format like I did feel free!

I really like this poem, I love the way you set it out it's so unique.Great work and take care,
Polly x

Perfect, my darling diva, perfect. i loved it. i reminds me of myself right now. i feel crushed, just as you seem. i loved it, just like i love every other piece you've ever written. sorry i haven't commented in a long time . keep up the beautiful work, *smiles

hb