Awesome hoho. love it. keep it up.

Thats great. i like how you wrote it like its a diary entry. its different, good idea.
love ya lots,
tammie

Duuude pleasssee hold it together. ive felt the same way with Becky, but we've always pulled through. just try to hang on. on a better note, this was a good poem, and i can tell its like your heart, on paper

Girl no its juss that we were bored and that i wanted to wright something, but I'm glad that you replyed, Well e-mail me somethime Ashleyxoxoxo@hotmail.com
Friends,
Ashley

"Free me from this pain in my heart,make me fresh,give me a new start.but please keep my secrets,they are very deep.my emotionsrun verysteep.i will not lie,but nor will i cry,tonight may be,the night i die"..i just wnna tll u tht ur poem expressed somthings i feel inside..it really touched me deeply..ur words were so strong and sad..especially the last ones..great work..5/5..
thxx 4 ur comment..

Nice. I tried to go as deep as i could on my poem but it's hard. I'm working on one right now and it seems empty. But i like the way you go deep deep down in your poems. Nice job. 5/5
-Vino

It's really really good. i really like this poem! it's so deep- so emotional!

keep writing!

lonelynow x x x x

You have a lot of great works on here. Some wont let me comment cause it logs me out but nonetheless this was amazing also. Deffinitly one of my fav authors now.