Oooo this poem is sad but you will find the one sometime in your life...really good poem

I liked the rhyme scheme behind this one too. You are a really talented poet and you should keep up the good work. 5/5

I think that the structure of the poem is awesome and very neat. I like it alot. It is full of emotion and shows how the person REALLY feels. Nothing left out. Good job. 5/5

I know how you feel on this one and how these things can hurt so much... and the last stanza i can very much relate to keep it up ;]

I would have to say the structure is well thought out. The flow and Ryhme, well there really isn't any. It was a great emotional peice that was very easy to read.

Peace, Joe