Hun i love this poem it is so touching and you really express your emotions through your words, please comment on some of mine it would be most appreciated, and if u ever need to tlak im here
love cass xoxo

This was really good, The flow of it was perfect, Though I think there is a mistake in the very last line;
"If only she could had she not died"
I don't really understand that, It just doesn't make sense. But anyways, This was a brillant poem, I loved it, Keep it up hun x-x

Awwwwwwwwwww very sad made me wanna give you big huggles and kisses lol yeah but it was a great one and i did love it and do i need to go kick his ass for ya cause ill break a nail lol

Excellent, the flow was knocked a little at points, and the repetition of some words, like life, in the same stanza made them lose their impact a little. However, the rhyming was excellent, and the poem's meaning was really good - great piece.

Peace. [Sole]