Not a bad Poem, pretty good, keep up the good work :)

god bless

Colt

*sniff sniff* In truth its sad that people actually feel like this at times.. but if there is one thing I keep coming across on this site its that ppl are going through the same things as each other. And they see things from different views. Thank you for sharing your views. Loved reading this.

Godbless
Sammib

Good rythm ;) i loved it

Great poem, 5/5

Really good! Thanks for the comment btw. I see what you feel. But when you use short hand, it takes away from the poem, lol. GREAT JOB otherwise 4/5!!!! :-)