Comments : First Lines

  • 18 years ago

    by Erikah

    OMG!!! I love that poem!!! It is so good! On da real tho, i love the way you said look at the first letter on each line. That was REALLY good even tho it was short. Big things come in little packages.

  • 18 years ago

    by Robie Lincer

    Awww thats amazing the way you wrote the poem, woow keep up the good work