That was great!!! i loved it! nicely writen and had emotion. 5/5
~*Katherine*~

This was very beautiful, very sad, but it had a sense of hope that i adore

This Was A Great Poem! Nice Emotion And Nice Flow! Keep Up The Good Work!
And I Dont Understand What Your Asking Me If Your Asking If I Really Wrote That Poem! Yes I Did I Wrote All Of Those And Those Are Exactly My Feelings On Paper... So Ya...
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Steph*xbr0k3ndr3amzzx*

That poem really made me think about love and how one person can luv u all ya life and u might never kno because u were scared to say, It was beautiful.

That poem really made me think about love and how one person can luv u all ya life and u might never kno because u were scared to say, It was beautiful.

Awww thats amzing your poems are great
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nice work keep wrtiing!!

Truely fantastic....purely perfact
~sarah~

Its ok not to bad

You must improve your flow of the poem and vocabulary. Do not repeat the same words many times and neither shoudl you repeat the same concept again and again; if you want to express something depply or strongly you must find appropriate words.

Again i think the flow was jumpy, but i liked the idea behind the poem, and i thought it was well expressed.