Wow! dear so touching! gr8 poem.
keep writing dear!

Wow that was a great poem maybe u can read my poem the truth hurts. 5/5 go fish bowl

Well u certainly hv got some new subjects with u to write on, very unique piece indeed.

all the best and take care

OMG i luved it really.....awsome....i gave ya 5/5 kinda can relate.....sadly.....but it was reel good!!!

Amazing poem! v sad tho. 5/5 thnx 4 ur comment :)

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I just CAN'T get over it! This is the SADDEST poem in the WHOLE world. So bitter-sweet! :)
PV
P.S. 5/5

Loved it. I can feel how special everything was. Good stuff.

Very touching poem very well worded and keep up the good work

Wow this was very touching. So very sad, I can kinda relate to it...lol. Anyways, excellent poem, I absolutely loved it. 5/5