Comments : Shallow Grave (re-done)

  • 17 years ago

    by Joe Holland

    I really like the poem. The last bit about walking with the grim reaper is brilliant. Very original layout. thnx for the comment on my poems i hope to see more from you soon

    Joe xxx

  • 17 years ago

    by Polly

    I really like this a lot, to start with I was a bit unsure but then I read it outloud and really got into the flow of it. I love the layout you have used, and the powerful language. Take care
    - Polly x

  • 17 years ago

    by aimee

    Its so unexmotional and it feels so real like as if you were there standing and staring but not completely understanding

  • 17 years ago

    by Nick Hanshaw

    Good...i like it...besides the cutting...its good...keep it up!
    -im cooler than you-

  • 17 years ago

    by EssenceOfLace

    This poem was, well, wow! i really liked it, especially the emding, very good

  • 17 years ago

    by XxfairyxXxkissesxX

    Thats awsome...really...i like it!

  • 17 years ago

    by Benny Boi

    Friggen awsome...absolutly ammazin stuff...keep this up!